rebeccas+story2

oh the happy days.i sat on my old shanty mat, watching my daughter, pavna stare into space.poor pavarna,i thought. i felt sorry for her because she always had to heave me up the crumbling stairs, which lead up to our house.(i only had one leg). that made me think weather we'ed move house.pavarna and her sisters noria and miriam tried there best to look after me. people walked by, and i winked at them,but they stuck there great,big snobby noses in the air and strolled off.so, during that time i again started thionking weather we'ed ever moove house. we'ed lived in lots of houses, but they al got bombed. the one we lived in now had one room and a tiny washroom.
 * chapter 1-the good old times**

me and pavarna set off home. when we arrived, i could sense the smell of naam bread. "whats cooking" i joked to my beloved wife,f atana."what do you think"she said."pavarmna!" yelled norias voice."what"said pavarna "i'm tring to awsh my hair!are you blind?"snapped noria."but your wasting all the water!"shouted pavarna."at least i keep myself clean.not like someone!¬!!!!" screamed nopria.they went on like that for ages until fatana yelled "STOP!YOU'VE WOKEN UP THE BABY!"the babys name was ali.the girls both trotted one afeter the other out of the wash room.just then........ the door burst open.. in ran the talaban soilders. they kicked over the diner.they dragged me out of the house and nearly blinded me.
 * chapter 2-HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!**


 * chapter 3-please come home,a visit from Pavarna**

"father,father,yo ho farther!" "pavarna?is it you?" "yes father yes.!" pavarna gave me a hug,well tried to but i was behind bars! "father you have tio come home ma' just sleeps and slleeps and sleeps! plus were all starving.ali looks like a human skellaton.so find a way to get out!" "i will. but not yet" "why,please!" "just wait until the right time comes!"


 * chapter 4-who on earth!?**

"arfternoon 'favva!' guess what!" "woah,woah,woah dont i even get a hello,how are you? not to mention that you, young lady call me father not 'favva!'" "how are you?...right as i was saying......" pavarna droned on about some women called Mrs weara. and boy did she "seem to weara you off a bit!". i mentioned this to pavarna.

pavarna didnt seem to find this funny! she explained that she had axcidentily ran into mrs weara when running away form a Talaban soilder!


 * chapter 5-who are you?**

the next day i heard pavarnas voice calling for me. i tried to get my neck round the bars-which i sucsessfully did ,because of my bony neck,but all i could see was a little boy waering familier clothes.the clothes wear familier because they wree what my son wore,but he died.mkaybe i was dreaming i thought,but anyway what else was there to do,NOTHING,so i went along with the so called dream.

"father!"the boy called from the aproxamatily 25yds gap between us. he ran over to me."hassain?"i asked,confused. "no,silly its me pavarna" "very funny hassain, your hallairious!" "no serious father its me!" it was Pavarna and she later explained to me that:- 1.mrs weara(yesits that ghastly women again)had an idea.... 2. which was to turn my daughter (yes my precious daughter) into a boy!

later that day i thought that i'd try and get out, like pavarna said.also, the walls were very weak!
 * chapter6-the hole in the wall.**

i waited till the guard went for his lunch breakand got busy. although i did not manage to get out, i made a little hole in the wall, which was good because: 1. i got fresh air and... 2. i saw My stall outside ande pavarna was there reading letters!

just then i started to panick.a talaban soilder rushed up to pavarna my heart skipped a beat. but i soon recovered when i saw cheeks rolling down his eyes! the next day.............

........moved in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! to my house, which I PAY THE TAX FOR!!
 * chapter 7-......mrs weara......**

pavarna came and told me that mrs weara had moved in to support the remains of the family. that cheered me up a little, but only a little!) and that they had all decided to orginise a privete little school.

a little more about mrs weara:

-white hair

-has one grandchild-who also moved in

-old

-retired hockey teacher+player

when pavarna left i saw a girl about pavarnas age picking up a wig?! then, and only then did i relise it was pavarnas old class-mate, Shauzia.
 * chapter 8-good old times(and friends"!)**

i saw pavarna and shauzia sit on my mat and started chatting away.

then shauzia started to help shauzia pack up her writing tools etcrea ecetra,walked down the street and turned the right hand corner. that obviousily lead to our home,.


 * chapter 9-free at last!**

during the next week, pavarna came to visit me"father,father,please don't tell anyone but me and shauzia are going bone digging! plus i have an idea i'm going to tell the guards that you only went to study in engaland because you could'nt get inoto anywhere in Kabul!"

and the decision was made! me noria,and mrs weera now all teach in the bone yard as no guard dares to go there! still we ahve to be careful because if any of the talaban find a scholl they will imedeitly close it down!

the end